Thursday, 28 November 2013

REFLECTIVE RESPONSE



After completing my first practise essay i have received some feedback.


- Was told I have to take care of my handwriting, which sometimes makes it difficult to read. : i honestly have been trying to change it for years.

I make clear and consistent use of media terminology but i need to use more examples e.g. - which specific vampire films/music videos did you research?
And which elements did you analyse within those products, and how did you apply this to your production work and show progress from AS to A2.

- for this I will have to revisit my research and revise what i have learnt for specific examples so to mention and evaluate my use of it in the exam.

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2 comments:

  1. Sheida Ay28 November 2013 at 06:58

    Try looking at exemplars. These could give you an idea of how to order or what to write about in your own essay!

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  2. Tarryn Rose28 November 2013 at 07:17

    Referencing films and videos you've seen will definitely help you. Also comparing the things you've seen with your products will be very helpful! :)

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