REFLECTIVE RESPONSE

After completing my first practise essay i have received some feedback.


- Was told I have to take care of my handwriting, which sometimes makes it difficult to read. : i honestly have been trying to change it for years.

I make clear and consistent use of media terminology but i need to use more examples e.g. - which specific vampire films/music videos did you research?
And which elements did you analyse within those products, and how did you apply this to your production work and show progress from AS to A2.

- for this I will have to revisit my research and revise what i have learnt for specific examples so to mention and evaluate my use of it in the exam.

In another fiddle

Again i was stuck on how to do certain things on photoshop, and again i resorted to Youtube which helped me.

Advert Poster drafts.

Here are the different drafts for the advert of the release of the single. 

The link to the questionnaire: 

https://docs.google.com/forms/d/1pbWHzj9f2bv6_vQ-EHPOGcMXKvI2xAt03TgZ-nWN_mM/viewform

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Further development ideas on music video and draft 3 of music video

*just documenting some thoughts*




LETTERS - draft 3 from farhana i on Vimeo.





Due to feedback from Mr Holloway and the rest of the class (who watched the video above) all say there needs to be something done to the beginning of the video where there is no sound or music.

So from that i have come up with some ideas:

To edit the song on Garage band and use the beginning part if the song ( the repeated notes on the guitar) at a lower volume and have that repeated.
- On top of that a voice over of the young girl (souz) talking,

Since we need to fill in a 20 second gap, i was thinking of some sort of monologue type  e.g,


"There's always that pivotal moment in life.

That one moment that changes everything and the result you carry for the rest of your life. 

You cant change it, it just happens. 
Faith doesn't notify you of the change, 

once its written there's no way of going back.

 You just have to accept it,

no matter how much it hurts"


This is a rough draft of the monologue.
I chose the words " once its written theres no way of going back" which ties in with the letter being written by the boyfriend saying he no longer wants to be in the relationship.

This is just to document my thoughts on what could be done next, i will later upload a video of a response of people watching the second draft (with the monologue and added scenes) and their response whilst watching the video.