Further development ideas on music video and draft 3 of music video

*just documenting some thoughts*




LETTERS - draft 3 from farhana i on Vimeo.





Due to feedback from Mr Holloway and the rest of the class (who watched the video above) all say there needs to be something done to the beginning of the video where there is no sound or music.

So from that i have come up with some ideas:

To edit the song on Garage band and use the beginning part if the song ( the repeated notes on the guitar) at a lower volume and have that repeated.
- On top of that a voice over of the young girl (souz) talking,

Since we need to fill in a 20 second gap, i was thinking of some sort of monologue type  e.g,


"There's always that pivotal moment in life.

That one moment that changes everything and the result you carry for the rest of your life. 

You cant change it, it just happens. 
Faith doesn't notify you of the change, 

once its written there's no way of going back.

 You just have to accept it,

no matter how much it hurts"


This is a rough draft of the monologue.
I chose the words " once its written theres no way of going back" which ties in with the letter being written by the boyfriend saying he no longer wants to be in the relationship.

This is just to document my thoughts on what could be done next, i will later upload a video of a response of people watching the second draft (with the monologue and added scenes) and their response whilst watching the video.